Things that I enjoy:
I like the fact that the signup was at the top. The purpose of the page was to be a sign-up page. But this is not very helpful for future parents of students that want to search for academic resources at Grove City. The “Peer Pathway” logo at the top is good but is a bit off center, I think I must place a larger image in to get it to fill the width of the page. I want to eventually incorporate all the design elements of peer pathway to match with the registration forum. I want this so the brand is cohesive on grove cities page. The clean look attracts people to organization. The design is supposed to make people feel like they can trust us in this process.
Things we can change:
The content on the page isn’t that engaging because peer pathways have not taken any pictures or videos of the goings on in the organization. It makes it tricky, especially on social media because it Is all pictures and video based. I think Peer Pathway could really step into video content of testimonials, sharing how the student-to-student mentorship shapes their academic career.
I also think the page could do a FAQ section match with possible questions parents or students could search for. I think there are a lot of questions with this type of mentorship because the academic piece is one of the main pain/struggles students face here at Grove City College.
I think the founders could be reduced to a couple sentences and smaller portraits. I like it when Gwen explains her vision and conviction behind why she’s passionate about this organization.
I want to create a row that has Mission, Vision, Values right below the signup button so if the user is a parent, they won’t just click out of it.
2 Responses
I think what you did here Lilly is very good i thought your team’s project was very high quality and useful. I think you have a good point about video content. However remember that we always notice our own mistakes more than other and mostly likely google will.
I really like the idea of adding a mission, vision, and values statement. I think that would give us a lot more credibility. I also think that getting more video content is going to be super helpful in getting this more exposed to the college and prospective students. Thank you for all that you’re doing to help make this successful!